1) The cookies in the box have star-shaped icing on them.
Ans: Every cookie in the box has star-shaped icing on it.
(Take note! The 'cookies' and 'have' have to be changed into singular form because of 'every'. It applies to each, none of, one of the, etc.)
2) This is the building. My office used to be located here.
Ans: This is the building where my office used to be located. (correct)
(Take note! 'Where' is used to refer to a place or location where and event is taking place. Adverbs like 'here' and 'there'have to be omitted.)
This is the building where my office used to be located here. (wrong)
3) They like dancing. They like playing badminton too.
Ans: Besides dancing, they like playing badminton. (correct)
(Take note! 'Besides' is used to express an event happening in addition to another. Words like 'also' and 'too' have to be omitted.)
Besides dancing, they like playing badminton too. (wrong)
Well, this is my first advice for synthesis and transformation. I hope I can post more to help :)
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